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You rise higher and higher
With a deafening roar you come to life
With a BANG!
You instantly light up the darkest skies
We gawk in silence
As you dance through the night
And then you fall. . .
Slowly. . . swaying. . .
Like the arms of a weeping willow. . .
Your beauty fades quickly from sight
But is everlasting in my mind
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Just a short poem I thought of while I was watching the fireworks tonight :meow:
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~woodgrave Jul 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Short, simple, and very well done. You begin with a punch; roar, BANG! And then, just as fireworks, your words calm down and soften in the end; weeping willow, beauty, fades. It's deliberate with a sweet finish.
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~terrahachi Jul 8, 2010  Student General Artist
Heehee thank you so much!!! :D
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